Persuasive Writing

hey reader's

 in writing at school we made a persuasive argument writing, it was pretty easy. these are the steps, first make a title then a introduction explaining a bit what your writing is about, next make three or four body paragraphs explaining some points that are good about the argument or bad about the argument, and last make a conclusion or what your writing is in a smaller version at the end. what i found hard was using the right words for what you are explaining about because you have to use some technical words in through some of your writing. lastly read through your writing and fix some words that could be better like group could be population. this is my writing below hope you enjoy. ;)

You should keep some animals in the zoo

Have you ever thought how many predators there would be to exotic and normal animals if you set them all free?

In my opinion, I believe that some animals should be kept in zoos, I believe this because there are lots of predators like lions, tigers, poachers (illegal hunters) the exotic animals might need help surviving so they can breed and keep there population.

Firstly, The predators as in lions can easily kill smallish animals such as foxes or in some cases they can kill tigers! Other predators include of tigers, some rodents hippos and elephants, but elephants don’t kill on purpose they accidentally stomp on them because elephants are herbivores. 

So would you let all of the exotic animals out and let them get squished and bit and sliced? no I wouldn’t!

Secondly, If rhinos and other animals that are endangered if you let all of them out then the poachers will probably kill them illegally. If black rhinos get poached then their population will easily die off because they are massively endangered their are only about five thousand left in the world. 

Would you rather let poachers kill all of the endangered species or lock poachers up?

Lastly, in my opinion the exotic animals should be kept in the zoos because quite a bit of the exotic animals are endangered. Because these animals are endangered they should be helped and cared for until they get old or healed.

Would you like to know that more animals are surviving? I would!

In conclusion, I believe that endangered animals should be kept in zoos so that they can be kept safe. These poacher’s and predators are endangering lot’s of different types of exotic animals like some frogs, tiger’s, lions, polar bears and also pandas. These are some are the cute animals most people like, and we are endangering them!

info report about computers

 for the past week we have learnt how to make a info report, first you have title then, body paragraph 1 the 2 then 3 and then a conclusion. and in all of those you need technical words, facts not non real facts they have to be true. this is my info report about computers. \/

Early Ages Of The Computer

Introduction

Have you ever had a computer?

Did you know the name of the first computer was called the E.N.I.A.C for short it’s full name was, “get ready for it”, Electronic Numerical Integrator And Computer.

Appearance

The E.N.I.A.C is one of the biggest computer it weighed 27 tons! But the biggest one weighed 300 tons!!! It was called the S.A.G.E semi automatic ground environment, it was by far the worlds largest computer. The E.N.I.A.C weighed a lot because they did not know how to make the computer smaller and they didn’t have the technology for it.

Video Games

Did you know the first computer game was made in 1958 and it was called pong. the makers name was William Higinbotham. According to research the most fun game is super mario bros. Also the second oldest game is space wars made in 2.14.1962. published by: Steve Russell.

Costs

Did you know that the S.A.G.E the biggest computer cost 67 billion that would be about half of the richest man todays money!!! And the eniac one of the first computers cost money back then =150,000 and todays money it cost =400,000. And the oldest apple computer is worth more than 300,000 thats alot for a old computer! 

No no no no no no 

Conclusion

As you can see obviously computers are much smarter than all the people ever COMBINED!!! “Do you think robots will take over the world”