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Thursday, September 6, 2018

HOKEY POKEY writing!

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Once upon a time there was a Kingdom of hokey pokey and a knight
of Butt-burg it was a Kingdom to. They were in peace until the King of
Dumbness came to the different kingdoms. He commanded them to
move but they didn't want to move. So they started a war over the two
kingdoms and all of them died. But they came back alive by a magical
angel…... nah just kidding! They were brought to hell by an evil devil called
death master. Then they met a swag dragon called Swag Bro they were
terrified but they got to go to Fortnight land and they got a golden scar.
Then they went back to the normal world and it was all back to the present.


Fairy tale

purpose: entertain others.
Audience: friends.
Walt: To use a variety of punctuation.
Success criteria:
to add punctuation to support the reader
Interesting words
Beginning, middle and end.

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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2018 at 11:54 AM

    Wow Logan Your story was hilarious me and my friends cracked up.
    You taught me about how good you are at making storys
    Yours sincerly
    Kade
    From Yaldhurst model school. .
    Great! I love how you did it
    Why did you think of making this?

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:13 AM

      i can just think of things traped in my mind and they just come racing out.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2018 at 12:11 PM

    Hi logan that is so funny my name is Rhys and im one of kade's friends that cracked up like a volcano it's amazing you came up with that.
    you are so good at making stories
    I loved it
    I have learnt there are some people that care about how
    good there stories.

    yours sincerely
    Rhys

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:14 AM


      thanks i like my stories to my mum says that i have an overactive imagination.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:08 AM

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