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Tuesday, August 28, 2018

hokey pokey

Hokey Pokey
Is a delicious dessert or treat to get from anybody. it was also made in 1950 which kinda makes it
a special thing i guess. Cadbury made a crunchie bar out of hokey pokey covered in chocolate
its in favorite boxes to.
First we measured ½ a cup of sugar and ¼ cup of golden syrup and we put it in a medium sized pot
on the stove. Then we mixed it for 1 long lasting minute.
then we put some baking soda into the golden syrup and sugar.
after we sturd it for another 2 minutes, after we put the baking soda in the mixture it turned a different color
and it turned a bit puffy and a bit thicker.
The chemical reaction was caused by carbon dioxide which is what we breathe out.
I can not wait to try the Hokey Pokey because itś a treat but at school itś more of
a treat than ANYTHING!!!!!!!!



I like how you put the title with the start of the story

I like how you have four paragraphs  

Next time you could do the writing bigger

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8 comments:

  1. Mrs Kelsey CliffordAugust 29, 2018 at 5:25 PM

    Hey Logan,
    You have some interesting facts here. I am wondering where you got these from? It is so cool that you got to make this at school! What did it taste like? Did you enjoy it? What would you rate it out of ten?
    Top tip - when you are copying from a doc onto your blog you need to make sure that the words don't go over the page because this annoys your readers.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:15 AM

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:26 AM

      it tasted like a sugary mess in my mouth.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:27 AM

    i got them from my mind.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:28 AM

    i loved it. i would rate it 7 out of ten.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:30 AM

    i will fix it today.

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  6. AnonymousAugust 31, 2018 at 11:45 AM

    what would you rate it out of ten.

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2018 at 11:26 AM

    Hi Logan its me Kahu and i like your work. next time maybe you could put a pitcher of hokey pokey but i stall like it and good job.

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